Hi my name is banjo and I am 12 years old and I am naughty well as people say I am. I live in a little cottage on the west side of a town called “sunny west vail”. and I live with my dad and little sister I did have a twin brother but he died duing birth and so did my mother and ever since that happened so I never really got to see my mother all I have left of her is a crimpled photo now I really need to get to school. the bell rang and I knew I was in trouble for being late.
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Hello Sophie,
I smiled as I read your first sentence explaining you were Banjo, twelve years old and naughty… well, that’s what people say. A good opening sentence can draw readers in to find out where the story might lead. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hello Sophie,
I smiled as I read your first sentence explaining you were Banjo, twelve years old and naughty… well, that’s what people say. A good opening sentence can draw readers in to find out where the story might lead. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia